17 responses

  1. Malik
    September 12, 2017

    Yhep! Passion is a flame that doesn’t die. Lovely piece at the intersection of poetry and prose. Big ups!

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  2. iAmNotAPerv
    September 12, 2017

    this is me. Except I have already balantly begged her to take me back and she said no. Oh well…
    Like he said there’s no good in goodbye when it comes to you.

    Great piece Aliu 🙃❤

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  3. Vhar.
    September 12, 2017

    Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!

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    • Mandy
      September 12, 2017

      You’re here laughing… If you’re laughing… Wait, how can you be laughing?
      This is a heartfelt baring of the soul na. How can you be laughing? 😢😢

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    • Francis
      September 12, 2017

      Hmmmmm, interesting. I knew this post sounded one kain familiar

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  4. Woo-hoo
    September 12, 2017

    Scary! What real love can do. More hurtful when it is not reciprocated. It scares me when I read these kinda stories because I can’t handle rejection at all! I hope Aliu gets back his lover… Please lover take him back for he has changed.

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  5. Brian Collins
    September 12, 2017

    Ewoooooooooooo, Aliu has made a come back. Won’t Moe forgive him?
    Pinky, I saw what you did o. I flew to ‘Categories’ after I saw Aliu, I don’t even understand anymore.

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    • Mandy
      September 12, 2017

      You saw what I’m see, Brian. So 890 was not fiction! 😱😱 Aliu is flesh and blood? Who’s Moe? Vhar!?
      Oh this ees tew much!

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      • Brian Collins
        September 12, 2017

        890 and the sequel had to be fiction na, abi was it based on someone’s life. And see Vhar is laughing like he knows something we don’t.
        Pinky, wee you keep qwayet in all of this?

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      • Pink Panther
        September 12, 2017

        😂😂😂😂😂 Oh yes o. You won’t hear pim from me.

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  6. Mandy
    September 12, 2017

    Beautifully written, Aliu. I do so hope you get your heart’s desire

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  7. freesurf
    September 13, 2017

    🎼🎼Think of all the time
    That I’ve wasted
    Think of all the times
    That I took you back
    Ain’t no way
    I’ll be lonely
    I don’t wanna
    Let you back in
    Let’s just face it
    Better off alone and
    I won’t turn back
    Thought that
    I would be lonely
    I don’t wanna
    Let you back in🎶🎶😱

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  8. Sorry not Sorry
    September 13, 2017

    Are we supposed to be feeling sorry for you? Get outta here! I can’t respect or feel sorry for any guy that raises his hands to hit his SO, not matter how poetic you wax. Good on the guy for walking away, not many people have that strength or are even able to survive long enough to…
    The fact that you keep pestering him even after so much time has passed is proof that you haven’t learned anything from your so-called errors. If you love him as you claim, then you should know enough to listen to what he wants and leave him be. If you can’t do even that, then your manipulative ass shouldn’t claim to be doing anything out of love. You just want your punching bag back. F*** off!

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    • Ayo
      September 14, 2017

      This, yes, this! If he’s truly learnt from his mistakes, he would certainly want to do what will make Trouble happy which is clearly to stay away from Trouble!

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      • Sorry not Sorry
        September 15, 2017

        Abi ooo! See me see wahala

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  9. Z
    September 17, 2017

    This is beautiful

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  10. Human
    September 19, 2017

    Wait, are we meant to feel sorry for you? Trouble did the right thing by leaving your sorry ass. After all the shit you caused him, you still want him back? That’s bullshit. People like you never learn. They just go through that cycle of remorse and stupid actions. Move on and leave trouble alone. You don’t deserve him

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