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  1. simba
    August 19, 2014

    Nice, I must say ‘Perfecto’ tho in real life, Ibrahim can’t resist the pleasure of reporting to school authority being a kid. Adults could, it’s called minding owns business. I pity umar, seems Ibrahim used emotional blackmail to perpetuate him as his mistress.. also ur main character the protagonist, u forgot to mention his name, u should have, even tho this a sequel.. Мне нравится ваше письмо. Так держать. In a more romantic and common language, loosely translated as, Me encanta tu trabajo. Seguid así

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    • pinkpanthertb
      August 19, 2014

      Kids won’t report too, if they have a yearning for the same pleasure, Simba. I know this. I attended a boarding school myself.

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  2. daniel
    August 19, 2014

    “From then on, I could comfortably say that I
    became Ibrahim’s bitch. We would meet at
    different places at different times. But whenever
    we were outside, we behaved like we didn’t even
    know we existed” that there, is total shit to me. I don’t like it one bit. Pity Umar much.

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  3. trystham
    August 19, 2014

    “Shock hugged me like it hadn’t seen me in
    decades.” Where do y’all get these expressions??? ROTFLMAO

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  4. Ugo
    August 19, 2014

    What did Umar expect you to do na?
    He left you “high and dry”(as I read in one novel like that).

    Anyways, this story is interesting. Please come and continue.

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    • pinkpanthertb
      August 19, 2014

      LOL! I’m hoping too he will continue. Fitz, ya hear that?! This is officially a series o. lol

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      • Fitzgerald
        August 19, 2014

        Lol… roger that!

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  5. Ruby
    August 19, 2014

    Nice Piece Fitzgerald… I like D̶̲̥̅ Twist bt it aint fair dat Umar had 2 loose 2 Ibrahim. Bt then again, its kinda his fault cos if he had let D̶̲̥̅ protagonist reach out 2 him, maybe (just maybe) they would hav stood up to Ibrahim (just М̣̣̥̇̊Ɣ random thinking)

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  6. dolapo
    August 19, 2014

    The only painful thing Ȋ̝̊̅§ dat Umar knows Ibrahim only wanted to break d relationship btw them and make him his bitch

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  7. Khaleesi
    August 19, 2014

    this is truly a beautiful and totally relatable piece. Fitzgerald, please please dont make us wait too long for the next episode abeg …

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  8. Colossus
    August 19, 2014

    ” It reminded me of this Nollywood movie I watched where Kanayo O. Kanayo wanted to join this cult and Pete Edochie (the Leader) asked him if he really wanted to join. Or was it Charles Okafor? Oh forget it, too many movies with that storyline.”
    Oddly, that’s my best paragraph.

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    • ¿¿¿
      August 19, 2014

      Me tooo! Lol! I loved the wittiness of that line

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  9. Anonymous
    August 19, 2014

    That was beautiful

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  10. Neon
    August 19, 2014

    Nice one Fitz… Totally relatable. Reminiscent of my days in middle school. Ibrahim reminds me of a senior student I offended, who threatened to report unless I gave him something special starting with an ‘S’. In no time, I unraveled his request and before long I was his bitch. He never reported, but I gave him my virginity. Kids so crazy things indeed! 🙂

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  11. sensuousensei
    August 19, 2014

    Great piece!

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  12. king
    August 20, 2014

    Nice piece Fitz….you have d talent oooo. I think Ibrahim and Umar actually had something secret going on btw them even b4 that’s why nothing was said by Umar…they were both pained that a 3rd wheel had now happened….anyway Oya continue b4 my ever ready hard on begin to wear out jo!

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    • pinkpanthertb
      August 20, 2014

      Hahahahaa! Good morning, King darling

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      • king
        August 20, 2014

        Goodmorning my love!! I see u but am missing u still!!

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    • king
      August 20, 2014

      Ooh and this reminded me of my own boarding school experience where victor outed me and another junior to our house Prefect but b4 the end of that week I and victor (his real name) suddenly manifested Konji for each other and rushed into one of d secret places near school and had blown out sex….woow….i still wonder till dis day how he developed d hots for me sef!!

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  13. courtsofdomasiobo
    August 20, 2014

    Lol can imagine these scenarios vividly

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  14. Regal Sweetheart
    August 27, 2014

    Ok. It’s been over a week now. Anybody care to tell me why Fitz hasn’t put up the third episode yet? Panther…your list of crimes against me keep growing.Soon it’d be a journal….

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    • pinkpanthertb
      August 27, 2014

      Hahahahahahahaa!!! Soon, dear. Soon.

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      • daniel
        September 18, 2014

        How soon? Please I need it like sex

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  15. daniel
    September 18, 2014

    Is this where the story ended? Where is the part 3

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    • pinkpanthertb
      September 18, 2014

      Part 3 was just updated today.

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