15 responses

  1. Biodun
    May 9, 2020

    Wow, how can you cum by just kissings

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    • Pink Panther
      May 9, 2020

      Really??? 😨 You think everyone needs much effort to cum?

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    • Colossus
      May 9, 2020

      It’s very possible

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    • Perola Negra
      May 15, 2020

      Cause there are people who by that experience alone triggers the emotions they’ve not felt before. It was even his first time.

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  2. Jinchuriki
    May 9, 2020

    Hell yes!

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  3. Denzy
    May 9, 2020

    lucid imagery. I just felt present in every scene and what an experience……

    Nice work Abrams.

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  4. Tariq
    May 9, 2020

    I can make do with such an experience in my life lol..

    Only problem is that I am perfect in masking my emotions….

    Someone once called me wicked fr not reciprocating attention….

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  5. Tariq
    May 9, 2020

    Btwn…I want to read more on this story eh….I love it.

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  6. Josh Zuckerberg
    May 10, 2020

    Oh, fiction!!! Thank Gay Jesus!

    Super writing, Abrams

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  7. Blehckzeen
    May 10, 2020

    This is beautiful!

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  8. Jahbless_Azubuike
    May 11, 2020

    I actually came from reading this piece….
    (smiles)

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    • Perola Negra.
      May 15, 2020

      😊👍🏻
      Cause of th imagery. Very surreal.

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  9. Perola Negra.
    May 15, 2020

    Thanks for this read.

    Totally loved it, every part of it.
    From the beginning, the buildup to the climax and even the use of imagery.

    Thanks again, and looking forward to your next work Abrams.

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    • Pink Panther
      May 15, 2020

      He has other works published here. Just type his name in the search box and click.

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  10. Blaise
    May 15, 2020

    Ooh…Coolio. Can I kiss you? Got me in the mood. More ink, Abrams

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